"Faithful" Readers...I give you a preview of what im hoping will be my first novel

Chapter 1
Blondy123 has signed into the chat-room.
Blondy123 says: Hey.
Billythekid says: Hi, who are you?
Blondy123 says: Oh, that’s not important. How are you?
Billythekid says: I’m good, you?
Blondy123 says: I’m not have bad myself.
Billythekid says: Why are you talking to me?
Blondy123 says: I was just looking through chat-rooms and I thought u were cute.
Billythekid says: Well I’m not, so you better stop talking to me!
Billythekid has signed out of the chat-room.

“Damn,” Cathy said to herself as she got off of the computer. “That’s the third one I’ve scared off this week. What the hell is wrong with me?”
“You are being too aggressive with them,” said Joe, her partner in crime.
“Well, why don’t you show me how it’s done Captain?”
“Fine”, he said, “I will, let me onto your AIM account.”
“Okay, lets see how you fair, these kids are a lot smarter than you think.”

Blondy123 has signed into the chat-room.
Blondy123 says: Hi, how are you?
Lionspikes says: Not bad, how about you?
Blondy123 says: Pretty good. What did u do all weekend?
Lionspikes says: Not much, pretty much just stayed around my place, what did you do?
Blondy123 says: The same, do you play a lot of sports?
Lionspikes says: Yeah, do you?
Blondy123 says: I love them. My favorite sport is basketball.
Lionspikes says: Really? So is mine.
Blondy123 says: Oh, that’s cool. What’s your favorite team?
Lionspikes says: Well, I really like the Sonics and Cavaliers.
Blondy123 says: Wow, what a coincidence. I live in Cleveland. LeBron James is my favorite player.
Lionspikes says: Sweet, he’s mine too.
Blondy123 says: He’s so amazing. I love how he dunks.
Lionspikes says: Yeah, that is amazing.
Lionspikes says: I wish I could do that.
Blondy123 says: I’m going to a basketball professional and he’s teaching me how to get more air to do those kinds of aerial tricks.
Lionspikes says: Sweet, do you know if he would be willing to teach me too?
Blondy123 says: Yeah, of course he would. Do you live in the area?
Lionspikes says: Yes, I live on Walton Lane, do you know where that is?
Blondy123 says: Yeah, I live about three blocks from there on Baltic Avenue.
Lionspikes says: Would you be willing to meet me at Lollipop Park around ten on Saturday morning?
Blondy123 says: I’ll be there. My name is Cathy by the way; I’ll be wearing a white sweatshirt and black pants. I won’t be hard to recognize.
Lionspikes says: Okay, my name is Leo.
Blondy123 says: Okay, I have to go, but I will see you on Saturday okay?
Lionspikes says: Sounds like a plan.
Blondy123 has signed out of the chat-room.

“You see how easy that was,” said Joe, “Like taking candy from a baby.”
“Yeah, yeah, yeah, nice work. I have to admit, you are smarter than you look,” said Cathy.“Thanks, you aren’t dumb either,” he said with a grin on his face.